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Machinauts RP poster by MidnightDJ-SK Machinauts RP poster by MidnightDJ-SK
A poster for a RP (sort of) that I am in, featuring, my RP machine in question, KV-103, the 'Fallen King'. In all of his chainsword wielding glory.
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CalebPerkins Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think you need to move on from robots. They are not the best thing to draw. They are to basic, you are basically drawing squares and boxes. But this one does show some hope in anatomy. The human features, such as the arms and leg muscles are great :clap:
But the part you need to practice in your artworks is the face. I am not a big fan of your face style. But that is probably just me. I think this is probably your best so far. The watercolour is great. You have skill in that area. Just make sure that the hand on the right looks like it is holding the sword. The hand should turn with the sword, if you know what I mean. It looks a bit wonky, the way he is holding it. He should have a firm grip for a dramatic feeling (if that was what you were going for)
Lighting is great, you have no need to practice the way you do shading and lighting. You have great skill and talent in that area. I congratulate you for that. And I encourage you to keep on practising that talent. Even if you are already good at it. You don't want to lose the skill do you? The more you practice, the even more skilled you will be at lighting and shading. But other than the two minor opinionated downfalls, this work is great in the whole!

Now for the rating:

Rating

skill - 8/10
detail - 6.5/10
scenery - 6/10 - it does not seem the least bit clear what the scenery is. - BUT that is not a bad thing. It allows you to focus your eyes on the character only and not worry about the background
shading and lighting - 10/10
depiction - 8/10 - (the title could be improved in the drawing, I cannot read what it says)
and the reflection on the saw could be improved to look like reflection. Just have an image on it.
originality - 7/10 - I don't find a robot that original

Great job overall! I rate your artwork...
7/10 overall!
:clap:
-CP 
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MidnightDJ-SK Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2017  Student General Artist
Thank you for your critiques. I like drawing robots and find them more challenging to draw than humans.
This is the end... by MidnightDJ-SK Spiral girls - Solotria (rule 63'd Solotron) by MidnightDJ-SK Digimon tribute: Fairimon by MidnightDJ-SK Character highlight: Midnight and Affraiel by MidnightDJ-SK
Surprisingly people do often point out that I am not good with faces, I will try to improve in the future.
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CalebPerkins Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well, you are not that bad. it's Just that I am not a fan of your style. Maybe some of them need work. But let me just say that I was wrong about one thing. You can draw people bodies alright. (I missed these ones you have showed me now. The 1st and 3rd ones are best. I give them faves! :) Great job on those. You are Quite talented actually. Even I need to improve on many things. And you are welcome for the critiques. If you could, I am open to criticism! :)
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The-Last-Phantom Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
COOL!!!

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ManchinesAndMonsters Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This reminds me of art l would see for Warhammer 40k 
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MidnightDJ-SK Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017  Student General Artist
That was the intent.
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ManchinesAndMonsters Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well you did a job that was spot-on c:
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